On the spot writing

To get us ready for our end of term writing sample we have been practicing taking a topic and writing 10 lines focusing on building a strong beginning to set the scene. We were given 10 minutes to draft our beginnings. The examples below are unedited and exactly what we have come up with. examples are a range of writing levels.

omg! I'm In the tourment with my team Playing Kubb I think I'm going to win. ok were on Lets go and win this trophy But Befour we go on we have to Exsize. we come out and the PeoPle Chree for us.

Kubb
Noise was deafing, people from all around the world is coming to watch us and join on the world's final tournament, Fireworks in the air Bang, Bang, Bang. My hands are shakeing. The crowd are going wild we can hear Mrs Tootile yelling go Room 6. I'v been waiting my whole life. 10 years of training, Running 10 kilometre. I started my 50 push-up and 50 sit up singing chris brown songs.

All over the world people come from everywere how they have made it into the worlds final. this is it thy say. The store saler have no food and they have perfume for the people who are switeing and drinks Because they don't want the stadem to smell like B.O the game has not started but everyone is yelling. So many people have gone out of there minds.

"Oh my gosh" this is so in barasing I can hear thousands of fan's calling my name. And my mum is the deafning sound saying go Tiana I know you can do this and saying come on my darling. I can't believe I am in the world's tournament in China. "I hope I win cube it's my only dream"  

Kubb
All over the world People have joined us to witness the world final Kubb Tournament ever. The crowed goes wild! every time a contestents enter the stadum but over 3 million people you can hear Mrs Tortill cheering, Go room 6. Then silents hit the room it all begins now

Kubb Tornament
I walk into the stadium and dream about winning the death tornament of Kubb and reciving the gigantic Gumball of Gold, I start getting nervous becuse I just might die today or tomorrow or when ever. fireworks bang right in front of me it starts to remind me of my trainings on the beach, mountain and everywhere else I've been, now all I have to do is hope and pray for my spectacular! Dream that I've since when I was 11 walk towards our battlefield and prepare for our battle.